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17th Translation Contest: "The Sounds of Silence" » English to Hebrew

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Source text in English

A theme of the age, at least in the developed world, is that people crave silence and can find none. The roar of traffic, the ceaseless beep of phones, digital announcements in buses and trains, TV sets blaring even in empty offices, are an endless battery and distraction. The human race is exhausting itself with noise and longs for its oppositeโ€”whether in the wilds, on the wide ocean or in some retreat dedicated to stillness and concentration. Alain Corbin, a history professor, writes from his refuge in the Sorbonne, and Erling Kagge, a Norwegian explorer, from his memories of the wastes of Antarctica, where both have tried to escape.

And yet, as Mr Corbin points out in "A History of Silence", there is probably no more noise than there used to be. Before pneumatic tyres, city streets were full of the deafening clang of metal-rimmed wheels and horseshoes on stone. Before voluntary isolation on mobile phones, buses and trains rang with conversation. Newspaper-sellers did not leave their wares in a mute pile, but advertised them at top volume, as did vendors of cherries, violets and fresh mackerel. The theatre and the opera were a chaos of huzzahs and barracking. Even in the countryside, peasants sang as they drudged. They donโ€™t sing now.

What has changed is not so much the level of noise, which previous centuries also complained about, but the level of distraction, which occupies the space that silence might invade. There looms another paradox, because when it does invadeโ€”in the depths of a pine forest, in the naked desert, in a suddenly vacated roomโ€”it often proves unnerving rather than welcome. Dread creeps in; the ear instinctively fastens on anything, whether fire-hiss or bird call or susurrus of leaves, that will save it from this unknown emptiness. People want silence, but not that much.

The winning entry has been announced in this pair.

There were 16 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase, 3 of which were selected by peers to advance to the finals round. The winning entry was determined based on finals round voting by peers.

Competition in this pair is now closed.


Entries (16 total; 3 finalists) Expand all entries

Entry #23020 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Lingopro
Lingopro
Israel
Winner
Voting points1st2nd3rd
307 x402 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.843.89 (9 ratings)3.78 (9 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 3 users entered 6 "like" tags
  • 3 users disagreed with "likes" (5 total disagrees)
-2
2
ืžื•ื˜ื™ื‘
Good term selection
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
ืฉืžืžืช
Good term selection
Tamar Beneli (X)
-2
2
ืœืคื ื™ ื‘ื•ืื ืฉืœ ื”ืฆืžื™ื’ื™ื ื”ืžืžื•ืœืื™ื ื‘ืื•ื•ื™ืจ, ืกืื ื• ืจื—ื•ื‘ื•ืช ื”ืขืจื™ื ื‘ืจืขืฉ ืžื—ืจื™ืฉ ืื•ื–ื ื™ื™ื ืฉืœ ืงืจืงื•ืฉ ื’ืœื’ืœื™ ื”ื‘ืจื–ืœ ื•ืคืจืกื•ืช ื”ืกื•ืกื™ื ืขืœ ืื‘ื ื™ื
Flows well
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
-1
1
ื‘ื‘ืœื™ืœ ืฉืœ ืฉื™ื—ื•ืช
Flows well
SolChas
ื”ื ืื™ื ื ืฉืจื™ื ืขื•ื“.
Flows well
SolChas
ืœื ืžื™ื“ืช ื”ืจืขืฉ, ืฉืขืœื™ื” ื”ืชืœื•ื ื ื• ื’ื ื‘ืžืื•ืช ื”ืงื•ื“ืžื•ืช, ื”ื™ื ื–ื• ืฉื”ืฉืชื ืชื”, ืืœื ืžื™ื“ืช ื”ืกื—ืช ื”ื“ืขืช, ื”ืžืžืœืืช ืืช ื”ื—ืœืœ ืฉืืœื™ื• ื™ื›ื•ืœ ื”ื™ื” ืœืคืœื•ืฉ ื”ืฉืงื˜
Flows well
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
Entry #23788 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
141 x44 x22 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.383.50 (8 ratings)3.25 (8 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 2 users entered 6 "like" tags
  • 3 users agreed with "likes" (5 total agrees)
  • 3 users disagreed with "likes" (4 total disagrees)
-1
+2
2
ื˜ืขื ื” ืจื•ื•ื—ืช ื‘ื–ืžื ื ื•, ืœืคื—ื•ืช ื‘ืขื•ืœื ื”ืžืคื•ืชื—, ื”ื™ื ืฉืื ืฉื™ื ืžืฉืชื•ืงืงื™ื ืœื“ืžืžื” ื•ืœื ื™ื›ื•ืœื™ื ืœืžืฆื•ื ืื•ืชื”
Flows well
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
+1
ื”ืฉืžืžื”
Good term selection
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
+1
ืœืคื ื™ ื”ืฆืžื™ื’ื™ื ื”ืคื ืื•ืžื˜ื™ื™ื, ืจื—ื•ื‘ื•ืช ื”ืขืจื™ื ื”ื™ื• ืžืœืื™ื ื‘ื”ื“ื”ื•ื“ ืžื—ืจื™ืฉ ื”ืื•ื–ื ื™ื™ื ืฉืœ ื’ืœื’ืœื™ื ืžื—ื•ืฉืงื™ ืžืชื›ืช ื•ืคืจืกื•ืช ืกื•ืกื™ื ืขืœ ืื‘ืŸ.
Flows well
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
+1
ืงืจื™ืื•ืช ืฉืžื—ื” ื•ื’ื ืื™
Flows well
SolChas
-1
1
ืขืžืœ ื™ื•ืžื
Flows well
SolChas
-2
ืžืคื ื™ ืฉื›ืืฉืจ ื”ื™ื ืื›ืŸ ืคื•ืœืฉืช - ื‘ืžืขืžืงื™ ื™ืขืจ ืื•ืจื ื™ื, ื‘ืžื“ื‘ืจ ื”ื—ืฉื•ืฃ, ื‘ื—ื“ืจ ืฉื”ืชืจื•ืงืŸ ืœืคืชืข - ื”ื™ื ืžืชื’ืœื” ืœืขืชื™ื ืชื›ื•ืคื•ืช ื›ืžืขืจืขืจืช ืฉืœื•ื•ื” ื•ืœื ื›ืžืกื‘ื™ืจืช ืคื ื™ื
Flows well
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
Entry #23984 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
1004 x22 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.503.50 (6 ratings)3.50 (6 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 2 users entered 5 "like" tags
  • 1 user disagreed with "likes" (1 total disagree)
ืžืฉืชื•ืงืงื™ื
Flows well
Amy Avgar
ื”ืžื™ืŸ ื”ืื ื•ืฉื™ ืžืชื™ืฉ ืืช ืขืฆืžื• ื‘ืจืขืฉ ื•ืžืฉื•ื•ืข ืœื”ื™ืคื•ื›ื•
Flows well
transmiri
-1
1
ืชื•ืœื“ื•ืช ื”ืฉืงื˜
Flows well
Amy Avgar
ืฉื’ื ื‘ืžืื•ืช ื”ืงื•ื“ืžื•ืช ื”ื™ื•ื•ื” ืžืงื•ืจ ืœืชืœื•ื ื•ืช
Flows well
Amy Avgar
ื”ื•ื ืžืชื’ืœื” ืœืขืชื™ื ืงืจื•ื‘ื•ืช ืœื ื›ื“ื‘ืจ ืจืฆื•ื™ ืืœื ื™ื•ืชืจ ื›ืžืฉื”ื• ืžื˜ื™ืœ ืื™ืžื”.
Flows well
Amy Avgar


Non-finalist entries

The following entries were not selected by peers to advance to finals-round voting.

Entry #22925 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.293.43 (7 ratings)3.14 (7 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
ืงืจื™ืื•ืช ืคืœื™ืื” ื•ืฆืขืงื•ืช ื‘ื•ื–
Good term selection
SolChas
Entry #23641 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.223.00 (7 ratings)3.43 (7 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 2 users entered 3 "like" tags
ืื—ื“ ืžืกื™ืžื ื™ ื”ื”ื™ื›ืจ
Flows well
Nuritbahir
ืฉื•ืžื
Flows well
ื ื›ื•ืŸ, ืฉื•ืžื​ ื™ื•ืชืจ ื˜ื•ื‘ ​ืžืขื™ืจื•ื
Nuritbahir
ืžื”ืจื™ืงื ื•ืช ื”ื–ืจื”
Flows well
SolChas
Entry #22922 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.093.00 (6 ratings)3.17 (6 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 3 users entered 5 "like" tags
  • 2 users agreed with "likes" (5 total agrees)
  • 1 user disagreed with "likes" (1 total disagree)
-1
+1
1
ืื—ื“ ืžืกื™ืžื ื™ ื”ืขืช ื”ื–ื•, ืœืคื—ื•ืช ื‘ืขื•ืœื ื”ืžืคื•ืชื—, ื”ื•ื ืฉืื ืฉื™ื ื›ืžื”ื™ื ืœืฉืงื˜ ื•ืื™ื ื ืžื•ืฆืื™ื ืื•ืชื•
Flows well
great tran​slation of​ a difficu​lt sentenc​e
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
+2
ืชืจื•ืขื•ืช ื•ืงืจื™ืื•ืช ื‘ื•ื–
Flows well
Tamar Beneli (X)
+1
ืžืคืœืก
Flows well
Tamar Beneli (X)
+1
ื”ืœื™ืŸ
Good term selection
Tamar Beneli (X)
ื›ื™ ืื
Flows well
SolChas
Entry #22948 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.073.00 (7 ratings)3.14 (7 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 3 users entered 5 "like" tags
  • 1 user agreed with "likes" (1 total agree)
ืกื•ื’ื™ื”
Flows well
ื”ืžื™ืœื” ืกื•ื’ื™​ื” ืžืชืื™ืžื” ืœ​ืžืงื•ืจ
mina kuttner
+1
ืกืื ื• ื”ืื•ื˜ื•ื‘ื•ืกื™ื ื•ื”ืจื›ื‘ื•ืช ืžืฉื™ื—ื•ืช.
Flows well
SolChas
ื”ืžื• ืžืชืจื•ืขื•ืช ื•ืงืจื™ืื•ืช ืงื•ืœื ื™ื•ืช
Flows well
SolChas
ื’ื ื‘ืื–ื•ืจื™ื ื”ื›ืคืจื™ื™ื ืฉืจื• ื”ืžืงื•ืžื™ื™ื ื‘ื–ืžืŸ ืขืžืœื.
Flows well
SolChas
ื‘ืžืขืžืงื™ ื™ืขืจ ืื•ืจื ื™ื, ื‘ืžื“ื‘ืจ ื—ืฉื•ืฃ ืื• ื‘ื—ื“ืจ ืฉื”ืชืจื•ืงืŸ ื‘ืคืชืื•ืžื™ื•ืช - ื”ื™ื, ืœืขื™ืชื™ื ืžื–ื•ืžื ื•ืช, ืžืคื—ื™ื“ื” ื•ืœื ื™ื“ื™ื“ื•ืชื™ืช.
Flows well
Itzik Greenvald Mivtach
Entry #23390 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.792.57 (7 ratings)3.00 (7 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #23285 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.442.25 (8 ratings)2.63 (8 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 2 users entered 3 "like" tags
  • 2 users agreed with "likes" (4 total agrees)
  • 1 user disagreed with "likes" (1 total disagree)
+2
ืžืฉื•ื•ืขื™ื
Flows well
Tamar Beneli (X)
-1
+1
1
ื›ืœ ื”ื ืจืื” ืœื ืจื•ืขืฉ ื”ื™ื•ื ื™ื•ืชืจ ืžื‘ืขื‘
Flows well
SolChas
+1
ืงื‘ืœื•
Flows well
Tamar Beneli (X)
Entry #22585 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.192.00 (8 ratings)2.38 (8 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #22978 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.172.00 (6 ratings)2.33 (6 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 3 "like" tags
  • 1 user agreed with "likes" (1 total agree)
ื‘ืืชืจื™ื ืžื‘ื•ื“ื“ื™ื
Good term selection
SolChas
+1
ืื™ืŸ ื‘ื™ืžื™ื ื• ื™ื•ืชืจ ืจืขืฉ ืžืžื” ืฉื”ื™ื” ื‘ืขื‘ืจ
Flows well
SolChas
ื ื•ืฆืจืช ืชื—ื•ืฉืช ืื™ ื ื•ื—ื•ืช ื˜ื•ืจื“ื ื™ืช
Flows well
SolChas
Entry #23575 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.172.00 (3 ratings)2.33 (3 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #22966 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Tamar Beneli (X)
Tamar Beneli (X)
United States
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry1.881.75 (4 ratings)2.00 (4 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #23212 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Niv H.
Niv H.
Israel
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry1.841.67 (3 ratings)2.00 (3 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #23441 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry1.381.25 (4 ratings)1.50 (4 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #23273 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry1.101.00 (5 ratings)1.20 (5 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags