我的稿子极差吗

nigerose wrote:

只说一句，“helped to”的主语是谁？

dumont wrote:
这种文宣材料也不属于保密的内容，不妨贴出（大部）：

wsmqz3 wrote:

我的稿子极差吗

wsmqz3 wrote:

给一国内翻译公司做的稿子， 国内价格大家也知道， 而这家公司还是国内公司中价格给的比较低的， 差不多是最低的了， 为自己也是为大家负责任起见，具体什么价格不说了，懂行的反正也能猜准。

就那么低的价格， 还说我做的达不到要求， 有点郁闷， 贴出来， 有兴趣的给说两句， 无论好坏， 都能舒服一点

汉译英：

在当今世界，创意产业已经从一种理念转化成为巨大的市场经济价值，在全世界每天创造出220亿美元的价值，并以5%的速度递增，在一些国家，增长的速度更快，美国达14%，英国12%。纵观全球，发达国家的众多创意产品、创意服务、创意营销和创意产业模式，吸引着全世界的眼球，构成了一股巨大的创意经济的发展浪潮，各国的创意产业以其各自独特的产业价值取向、领域和方式迅速发展，成为一个国家或一个城市未来发展和竞争市场的制胜法宝，展现出创意产业全球蓬勃发展的热烈景象。

In today’s world, the creativity industry has been converted from a concept to a practical existence that represents an enormous market value. All over the world, it now can produce the value of up to 22 billion dollars just in one day, and the amount will keep increasing by 5%. In certain countries, the rate of increasing is even higher --- 14% in America, and 12% in Britain. By now, the attention of the entire world has been drawn upon so many creativity industries, as well as the creativity products, creativity services and creativity marketing activities in the developed countries, and consequently helped to form up a remarkable development trend of creativity economy. A world-wide scene of blooming creativity economy is being shown to us just now, with the creativity industries in different countries getting on with developing rapidly on the basis of their particular industrial value orientation, fields and modes, and having become the core competitiveness for a country or a city to develop or to take part in the market competition in the future.

isahuang wrote:

大家都认为“创意产业”应翻为“creativity industry"吗？I would choose creative industry.

Creative industries typically include industries that focus on: creating and exploiting intellectual property products such as music, books, film and games; or providing business-to-business creative services including advertising, public relations and direct marketing. Aesthetic live-performance experiences are also generally included, which contributes to an overlap with definitions of art and culture, and even aspects of tourism and sport. Economic activities focussed on designing, making and selling objects or works of art such as jewellery, haute couture, books of poetry and other creative writing, and fine art are often included in the sector because the value of such objects derives from a high degree of aesthetic originality.

Creative industries exclude, and contrast with, industries that derive value by transferring ownership of pre-existing property (such as retail, financial-services and real-estate industries), by making a commoditised product or service (such as auto-manufacturing and electric-utility industries), and by maintaining or enhancing what already exists (such as the auto-repair industry).

dumont wrote:

广西，古称“巫蛮之地”。
Guangxi is a region anciently known as the “Land of Witchery and Barbarity”.